I was wandering along the street, and then i saw it. the treasure that changed my life. A Diamond! it was buried underneath the pavement, with just a little piece jutting out of the ground. i picked it up, and then I was transported to another dimension. it felt like i was swirling around and around. all i could see was a dark purple colour swirling around me. i look down, and realise it is also dark purple, and realise that this diamond was a trap. as i wondered what would happen to me, it started glowing brighter and brighter.....
well done I have one little thing when it just says I make it a capital I
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