tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4761723602938780592.post3580229623265410098..comments2020-12-08T11:23:26.491-08:00Comments on Noah Fifita Rm 13 O.I.S: 100WC#5Harriet McGowanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07266426881791098979noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4761723602938780592.post-47621151779576807392020-07-01T08:38:48.474-07:002020-07-01T08:38:48.474-07:00This is a very clever story, Noah. In the first s...This is a very clever story, Noah. In the first sentence I thought you were the human in the picture. Then you carefully let me know that no, it is the other way around! The first hint is that you talk about ‘a glint of silvery metal’ rather than a car and then it is completely clear when you refer to your snout. You have put yourself so well in the place of the polar bear, thinking like he does and seeing the world form his viewpoint. What a great story!Janet Team 100WChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04281736906557986710noreply@blogger.com